2012년 3월 27일 화요일

outline for 3 perspective essay


1st : I am stealing some parts of chicken while delivering in chicken day.
2nd : At that time, the hojung is over and the owner of chicken came into room, and saw my stealing. So me and him had some argument
3rd : my coworker is watching it

As I’m the member of the Ministry of food and nutrition, I deliver chicken in chicken day. Everytime, I steal some pieces from boneless chicken like Padak. However, while eating that stolen chicken, the owner came in and saw it. So, we had some argument, and my coworker Jiho is watching it.

2012년 3월 13일 화요일

The problem of anonymity

When I watched Catfish, I thought of Dae-gi Kim's Facebook page. Last year, when I was doing Facebook enthusiasically, I found some teachers from it; such as Dr. Hwang, Dr. Han, etc,. However, the most zappy one from the list was Mr. Dae-gi Kim, the dormitory supervisor.
At first, I thought it was really him, because he was good at computer. He knows how to use Excel and he knows what students are doing in computer. Also, my grand parents are doing Facebook, sending message and e-mails to me. So, it wasn't a surprise for me that Mr. Kim's doing Facebook though he seems to be out of date.
I was hesitating because I liked to play tetris during the self-study time. If I add him as my friend, he would know whether I'm signed in or playing games instead of studying hard.
However, it was bit strange. The comments and other stuffs on his wall feels odd. I looked up the comments. It was like
"Mr. Kim, please don't catch me by Computer Violation!",
and the reply of Mr. Kim was
"You look ugly! Computer Violation!".
 It was quiet confusing. So, I asked my roommates who the hell is this guy. They didn't have any confidence but they said it's one of our senior or a 16th waver. I admired them. Whoever made this, it was so creative. But I started to worry about it. Can't they have any chance to do the special training for 1 month, and parents coming to school?

Though he made Kim's page for fun, it was impersonation of Kim, and most of the comments written by him was quiet insulting himself. He acted like a stupid on his page, so that everyone can laugh with it.

One day Mr. Kim saw it and just said 'delet it'. It was nice of him. Though he got angry, he accepted it as joke.

I think Catfish has many similar aspect with this case. One person frauds other person by not real identity. One big difference between Kim's case and Catfish is that Kim's case was for fun(though it broke Kim's heart), and Catfish was really frauding someone else.

Whether it's the matter of money or not, it's still the matter of morality. They sold pictures and earn money. She fraud him that she loves him.
While watching the movie, I felt so spooky. Some people say the guy who visits online friend is not usual too, but they are in relationship, so he have the right to visit her house and have some date!

Since my policy of adding friends is to add my off-line friends, I think it was nice idea. The point of this movie was 'do not trust online friends,' and I will never add new friends online.

2012년 3월 6일 화요일

Walmart, the company that should be get rid from society.

Before dealing with the topic about Wal-mart in Mr. Garrioch's class, I never knew that there are some markets called Wal-mart in America, which is similar to E-mart of Korea. I actually had no information about it, which means I can have mutual stance before I gather information, and can make a stance.
During the research, some of my roommates told me that Wal-mart failed in Korea, while it's the best discount store in US. I was impressed. Usually, big companies, more likely to be corporations, didn't fail in Korea. Such as Microsoft, Apple, HP, etc. What reason made them to fail in Korea? That was my first question and I would like to start from it.

Though Wal-mart had enough money and elegant system, those strong points became obstacles when they were in Korea.
The reason why they were unsuccessful in Korea was, the quality of their products. In the case of E-mart, they provide high quality goods in low price, but now lowest price. If we go to E-mart, we can see many high price clothes such as North Face, or Cnepa. However, in the case of Wal-mart, they have clothes that fits well with their prices. Though Koreans like cheap stuffs, they want high quality goods.
Though with these obstacles in Korea, they succeeded in America, and brute some serious problems.

I don't care on which way did Wal-mart succeed in US, I don't like it.

The first reason why I hate them is they give negative affect to small shopkeepers. Though Wal-mart have low quality, they also have low prices, which make ordinary people to go. As people go to Wal-mart, small shops lose their customers and incomes. The best example is my home town. My home town, Hanam city, nearby Seoul Metropolitan, it's half rural(farms, mountains, river, etc) and half urban. Our hometown's population is only about to 150,000. However, as the city grown, hypermarkets and discount stores started to come in. In this small city, we have Home Plus and E-mart. People started to go to those hypermarkets, rather than going to small supermarkets in town or traditional form of markets in old section of a city. As customers move to hypermarkets, small shopkeepers lose their customers, and they started discount to sell products in same price with other hypermarkets. In summer, the supermarket in front of my home sold ice-cream in 40% of production cost. Few supermarkets were closed. This effect is called Straw Effect, which make local economy to collapse. Somehow it's also called “Walmertization”.

The second reason why I hate them is because their employees paid less than average of workers in industrial area. Though Wal-mart says they are hiring people like a family, they pay 9 dollars per hour, while other industries pay 22 dollars per hour(Story of Minimum Wages, Dr. Kim, 1997, Korean Ecomonic Newspaper Company). Also, they hire coloured people, women, and hire them as temporary position. As they employee people as temporary position, they can fire them anytime they want. Paid lower than other jobs and have high possibility of being fired, but work a lot. This is pretty problematic for employees. 
Also, in the Jisik Channel e, EBS team says that chlidren in South Asia, Africa, and South America are not paid, but spend all day long in factory or farm, instead of studying in school. Especailly the South Asians are making soccerball, soccer shoes, and other sports wares more than 15 hours a day, only with 5 dollars per day. However, big markets such as Wal-mart is selling stuff more than 30 dollars per ball.

The final reason is the problem between subcontractor and Wal-mart. The clothes and other stuffs are made in Southeastern Asia, or South Asia, Africa to keep the lowest price in the country. However, there once had a accusation in Saipan. The problem was infirngement. Confinement, beating, maltreatment, overworking; those were conducted by subcontractors of Wal-mart and other discount stores and hypermarkets. When the accusation was triggered, among 10 defendants, Wal-mart was the very first defendant.
Also, the problem occured in China.  July 6th, 2010, the Chinese Government sued Wal-mart for selling Genetically Modified Rice(GMO rice). Checkbiotech Organization says that 'According to an ongoing Greenpeace investigation of nine Chinese regions starting in July 2009, GM seeds were traded in provinces of Hubei and Hunan, while GM rice and its processed products such as rice powder were sold in retail stores in Hubei, Hunan, Fujian and Guangdong provinces.' Especially, the government was banning GMO crops strictly, but Wal mart brought some problems, which can be regarded as the confliction between local government and subcontractor.

Those are the reasons why I can’t prefer Wal-mart. Though they are claiming to manage employees like a family, they pay less than average, they make employees to work more, and their subcontractors treat employees like a slave. Also, the problem in local economy occurred by Wal-mart is serious, and even called ‘walmartization’, and somehow they have problems between local communities and subconductors. Concerning those stuffs, though Wal-mart is comfortable to use, it’d be better to regulate and something must be done by.
#Story of Minimum Wages, Dr. Kim Jae won, 1997, Korean Economic Newspaper Company, page 109, Minimum Wages in Developed Countries
#Jisik Channel e (Season 1), EBS, 2007, Book House, page 272, Children in South Asia

2012년 3월 2일 금요일

Second Draft : Ode to B737


It was January 27th of 2003, the first day I met you. It was the beginning of my holiday, my trip to Jeju Island. On the way to the airport, I saw so many airplanes more than I'd even seen before, outside of book. We saw each other before boarding. You were wearing a clean blue uniform and had the Korean Air’s logo on your tail. Of course, it was my first flight, and your imposing paint also made me agitated.
When I got inside you, you were making the slight and soft sound of an engine, which made me even more agitated. The sound of your engines meant my first flight would start soon.
Slowly, you moved your body to taxi the runway, and you stopped there for seconds. You said, “Korean Air, Kilo Echo One Two One Five, cleared for taxi.” Then you started to charge. Then you said “Ready for take off.” And you just motioned your head up, and started to climb8. I was so impressed. Until the moment, the fastest transportation I ever took was my father’s car. The sound you made before the take off, soft engines and harsh crossing winds. It was so exciting.

However, the time I could spend with you was too short. Your fast speed and short distance was the problem. I was feeling the freedom of watching clouds , and tiny villages below, and suddenly we were 3000 feet above the sea. Unfortunately, there were no traffic jams, so we landed as soon as we got to class C. Our first flight finished in 1 hour and 15 minutes. The second flight, the way back to Gimpo from Jeju, I was too tired to enjoy your company, so I slept. 


With you, I was able to know the freedom and fun of flight. Finally, I told my parents that I wanted to be a pilot when I grew up. My parents worried about it, and I didn’t know why. As I went to middle school, I figured out that I have bad sight, have nearsightedness, and astigmatism. So, I gave up my dream to get a CPL and work in Korean Air, and started to live a normal life; study as much as I can.

I figured out that my true dream was to flight, not teaching students in University and do research. I tried to find out the way to become a pilot. However, the reality was harsh. Sorry to you, I found out that the only way to flight is to get a PPL and fly with Propeller plane such as Cessna. Tough I can’t have a real flight with you, I’m meeting you through the flight simulator.

After graduation, I’m going to get a PPL, and have a flight with Cessna. However, it was you that enabled me to find what I want to do, and gave some hope to me not to give up my dream. Every time I see you on photo or simulator, you remind my memories and feel thankful to you.*/
But, I truly love flight. The feeling of freedom after naviagting 2km of runway and take off. The villages and cities I can see, rivers, lakes, mountains, crops, sea, the clouds below me, night scenes of airports and metropolis cities, the thrill when the craft wobbles, the sound of scratching winds with spoilers, the feeling of rocking when we land, everything I can feel during the flight is so satisfying and exciting to me. Maybe among them, the freedom I can feel when I strive through white clouds and blue sky. 

I’ve been to many cities and countries with you; Hanoi in Vietnam, Osaka and Fukuoka in Japan, Beijing and Tianjin, Kunming in China, London, Amsterdam, Rome, Vientiane in Laos, Phnom Penh in Cambodia, Jeju, Incheon, Gimpo… Every time I have a flight with you, you give me freedom and joy.